Happiness is a butterfly, which when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you will sit down quietly, may alight upon you.
Nathaniel Hawthorne
Words placed beautifully, used like paint to form a picture i can truly see.. love the 'my peacock butterfly.. fans out as a rainbow.. after a shower..' There's heart exposed here..
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you very much. I'm so glad you have enjoyed reading my poem and also thankful you have taken t.. read moreThank you very much. I'm so glad you have enjoyed reading my poem and also thankful you have taken time to read it. :)
Thanks for your kind words Delmar. It means a great deal to me what you have said now. It's a bit of.. read moreThanks for your kind words Delmar. It means a great deal to me what you have said now. It's a bit of a confirmation for what I write :)
Rudi
Rudi
10 Years Ago
Rudi, you do not use English exactly as I use it. This gives your work a fresh look at the art of e.. read moreRudi, you do not use English exactly as I use it. This gives your work a fresh look at the art of expression by words. By no means fret about your English.
10 Years Ago
Okay, I won't do that anymore, but please, if I make mistakes that are too severe, give me a sign. I.. read moreOkay, I won't do that anymore, but please, if I make mistakes that are too severe, give me a sign. I won't be offended. :)
Rudi
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..