Holding

Holding

A Poem by RubyOmma
"

why let go

"
Hold on
and hold on just for today
let the lights flash 
and take you away.
Let the night bells ring
and the morning bells chime
take the pills 
and wait for sometime.
Fill you heart with dreams 
and wishes
feed the dog 
and feed the fishes.
Dance for the plants 
and kill the time slowly,
slowly... slowly...
linger in there.
All will become clear
and there will be time.
Hold on.

© 2015 RubyOmma


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I am amazed how you words soothes my mind whenever I read them, they are like perfume in the air.

Posted 9 Years Ago


All will become clear
and there will be time.

Hold on.

Its beautiful and hopeful write. Action is our and reward is award so must be wait, patiently.

Posted 9 Years Ago


indeed take time to smell the roses, life will still be there when we sit back and just breathe awhile, relax and write more like this Ruby :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Patience... Patience... Patience... Something I need to tell myself more often. I love it! Keep up the great work, my only thing would be to keep the lengths of the stanzas similar in size, as the last one was two. But that's just my opinion!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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RubyOmma
RubyOmma

Pohang/Deagu, Gyeongsandbuk do, South Korea



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