Lover

Beautiful Man Peter

Blonde and yet grey

touch my hair

kiss my ear

and leave it there.

Massages and kisses

not running too fast

I want to sprint 

and you want to rest.

Take me to dinners 

and dress me in coats

how did this come

When you touch me

I float.

Into a dream world where

you and I

are dancing in corners

and into the sky.

Keep me in silence

don't meet any friends

is it on purpose,

will this slow

ever end. 

I want to be yours 

and make Danny's 

and Roses

I want to dance for you

show pretty poses.

Come to me quickly

I don't like to wait.

Time is all we have 

and I'd hate to waste

it. 

I'd hate to lose you,

my dear.

Take me to heaven

it's yours to make ours

Take my hand

Turn around

and look to the stars

Consider the chances 

and think of the 

chance

I think

After seeing you

I will never love another

man. I won't even glance.

All won't be gone

I'll have my dachshunds

and I will love them

and take them by hundreds

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I really like this poem. It feels light and sentimental at the same time. I do feel you can improve on the flow of the writing. So the first 7 stanzas seem to have a harmonious flow between one another...and then the same flow just breaks from that moment on and feels a bit forced and arrhythmical. But otherwise I really enjoyed this.

[The Twin Arenas]

Great, great last stanza. Very personal. Detail like that is what makes sentimental lovey dovey pieces like this stand out from the rest of the hair clogging that drain.

[R Smith]

a lovely poem Ruby, tells a nice story and has good feeling, bravo :)

[Mayank]

I love such romanticism... this is where our passion play...

[AaronFreitas]

Oh wouldn't it be nice to be able to have all the things we want in our significant other :) Great poem

[Saddam]

Its beautiful. Write in simply way but beautiful.
I like it.