Story Idea: Rest in Peace.

-This is my story "Rest in Peace" about a girl who was killed, but is still walking among the living. She is under the guidance of a man who calls himself a "Guardian" who can bend things to his will-

 

I'm 16 year old Valerie.

But... I'm not exactly 16.

I'm already dead.

The man who killed me was insane.

"Don't take another step, you freaks!" He screamed.

"Sir, release the girl!"

"No! I'm not doing ANYTHING for you talking blobs!"

"Please, sir. You are seeing things."

"NO!!! I'm going to SAVE this girl!"

Then, well, you know what happens next.

I opened my eyes to see a field.

Beyond that field was a  graveyard where I could see people.

I walked closed to see it was a funeral.

MY funeral.

I wanted to run, screaming "Mom! Mom! I'm okay!" but someone stopped me.

"That would put everyone in danger, Valerie." A man said.

He had blonde hair and blue eyes.

His coat was white with a blue trim, and he had a collar with a blue trim

"You have to come with me." He said.

"A-Are you an-"

"Angel?" He said. "There's no such thing, but only something similar."

He reached out his hand, and grabbed mine.

"Follow me."

With a wave of his other hand, he opened a portal and lead me through.

This is a sample of what the first chapter would be! Do you think I should continue and make it a full-on book?

Post it in the reviews, people!

I hope you enjoyed it. :D

Author's Note

Do you think I should write this?
If yes, should I change it a little?

Reviews

[Ruby Pokedex]

I'll be sure to make it.
I'm going to take this preview and improve it immensely, putting more on the death and field scene.
I hope it is better than the preview I made above.
-Ruby Pokedex

[bunnehbooh]

I think you should write this, it seems like a great idea.
Just some pointers using more details will make everything all that much better.
I have a few ideas for a line when she wakes up in the field, I'd be more then happy to share with you.