She took it all away.

Yeah, she took it all away.
And I could see it coming,
But,you know, I was kinda blind,
Kinda addicted as in dope or wine.
Now there's nothing left here.
I'm not being the victim,
I am the murderer.

My feelings are fading out,
My emoticons are slipping away,
And there's nothing here.
There is no pain,and i don't miss her.
No words left to say.

But there are words left unspoken.
Why can't I be in peace?
I change so much,
And I don't regret it.
But I feel empty, i gave it all away.
Why did I gave it away?
Love is such a precious thing.

Empty. Just empty.
A great hole in my mind.
Why did i give it all away?

All that remains are the strings
That suffocated me.
Death can be sweet sometimes.
I can be dead,
but i ain't resting in peace.

Reviews

[MajorJesusFreak]

I love it. I can tell there is pain and grief. One thing though that I learned from someone who comments on all my work; you don't need to put commas or periods after every line. It takes away from the mood you're portraying. Overall though you did very well.

[Misled Legend]

I like this. I can sense the emotions throughout it. Keep it up!

[darkgurl]

very well written write so full of emotion. Written so well.