It was nice to see you again.

It was nice to see you again.

A Poem by Ruben Dias

How am I?
I changed a lot, since you left my world.
I'm lighter, and I'm emptier,
I'm a little less blind, and a little less crazy.
But I'm a little more scared, and a litle more sceptic.

There is always a time for you, though.
A time to think about the past and smile smoothly,
A time to think about the present and cry pathetically.
But life goes on with or without me, and so did you.
At least I dont miss you now.
As a lover.

But I miss you as a friend.
I miss the way we were.
We promise to each other to never let go.
But those were sweet sweet lies.
Love made me believe in them.

It was nice seeing you, though.
It was nice to see that you are great without me.
Anyway, it was nice to see you again.

© 2010 Ruben Dias


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Ruben Dias
If you find any mystakes, please tell me=)

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I loved this!! I've been through a situation so similar to this. When you see someone that you used have a relationship with, it brings back a flood of memories and ideas of what the two of you could've been... and when you see that they have moved on and are happy without you, it can hurt so badly... but it also sets you free. Because you're free to find the person you were truly meant to be with.

I loved the simplicity of you style. No fluff. Just feelings. Loved it. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This one is my favorite by far. In the first stanza though you misspelled little by accident it needs another "t" and ceptic is spelled skeptical. Overall I loved it. Keep up the good work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'm pretty sure lyes should be lies and in the next line on should be in, but im not completely sure. You're the writer, you're the only one who knows what was truly meant.
Overall I enjoyed your writing. It was easy to connect with.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this!! I've been through a situation so similar to this. When you see someone that you used have a relationship with, it brings back a flood of memories and ideas of what the two of you could've been... and when you see that they have moved on and are happy without you, it can hurt so badly... but it also sets you free. Because you're free to find the person you were truly meant to be with.

I loved the simplicity of you style. No fluff. Just feelings. Loved it. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I dont see any mistakes, just a most sincere lovely write full of hope.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ruben Dias
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