Moon Senryu

Oh what a great honor it is to be a mirror

We,  like the moon
Reflective of Source,
Veiled in beauty

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

My-GOSH, Rosalee!
What a gorgeous picture … display it above your poem in its larger size, too, that we enjoy its ambience while reading.
How wonderfully enchanting and beautiful the way you express We as mysterious, moonlike mirrors, a source of veiled beauty.

Thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully for sharing your lovely, creative heart and mind! ⁓ Richard : )


Quick Lesson:
Haiku = a Nature theme only.
Senryu = a Human theme (sometimes, blended with Nature).
Thus, this would be "Moon Senryu".

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Oh thank you so much Richard! I am so honored by your review and comments on my work! I actually didn't know the differentiation between the two before.. Quick question on that (haiku vs. senryu) does this ride the line between the two since it's nature and human theme combined? 🤔Haha brain teaser! I'd love to hear your opinion on that - thanks again!

[Richard🖌]

You're most welcome, Rosalee.
No brain teaser to me … many do not know the difference between Haiku and Senryu.
The Senryu -- though, of Human theme, can contain elements of Nature, but a Haiku must be about Nature only.
I thought I explained this in my review.
I see you did not use my suggestion on your splendid picture.

My pleasure, Rosalee. : )

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Haha you did, I guess I was wondering if this was an exception to that rule lol mostly because it was new info. Thanks for your comments and actually i don't know how to add the image on the intro page larger. I'm on the mobile site and it seems to not allow it. I'll check it again. Thanks for your suggestions!

[Richard🖌]

Always,
Your most humble servant. 😌

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. Meaningful words and thoughts with 10 words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you for stopping in and commenting! I very much appreciate it! 🙂

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this one and you are welcome.

[Manos]

It is my first Haiku in English :)

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thanks for stopping in and leaving a comment 😉

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I like the tenor of this quite 'romantic' write and the suggestion that we reflect beauty.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you John! Come again!

[John the Baptist]

Nice philosophy in this one. Still, spellcheck "Vailed."

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you! I appreciate your review!