Loony Bin

Oh how you drove me mad...

Oh you that secret intoxication hidden, like a bathtub gin
My heart of hearts, a deadly sin
I took you at once and desperately held on to you, my linchpin
Never realizing that you were ridged and calculated, a firing pin
You cut my heart in slices, a mandolin
Drove me crazy outta my mind, the loony bin

© 2017 EcstaticEuphoria

Author's Note

A little rhyme exploration and a little humor... Let me know your thoughts!!

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Barnaby

Enjoyable to read, I would have appreciated more depth in description of detail in poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

great comments! Thanks for your review!

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Added on August 14, 2017
Last Updated on August 14, 2017
Tags: passion, pain, sadistic, laughter, hate, love

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EcstaticEuphoria

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I'm still me, but i stopped writing for a while, not willing to share myself. I'm back with a new persona to share again without abandon. I am an aspiring author in the process of becoming myself,.. more..