Loony Bin

Oh how you drove me mad...

Oh you that secret intoxication hidden, like a bathtub gin
My heart of hearts, a deadly sin
I took you at once and desperately held on to you, my linchpin
Never realizing that you were ridged and calculated, a firing pin
You cut my heart in slices, a mandolin
Drove me crazy outta my mind, the loony bin

Author's Note

A little rhyme exploration and a little humor... Let me know your thoughts!!

Reviews

[Barnaby]

Enjoyable to read, I would have appreciated more depth in description of detail in poem.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

great comments! Thanks for your review!