How? When? Why?

Because...

How?
How could I?
Be...
Be mad?
When all,
When all I
Could feel
Is sad?

When?
When could I?
Stop loving...
Stop loving you?
When all,
When all I
Could conceal
Is true?

Why?
Why could I?
Pretend...
Pretend you never were?
When all,
When all I
Could forget
Is sure?

Author's Note

New scheme, give me your thoughts!

Reviews

[Misterr Remeat]

Wow
Thundering in its simplicity. Like it just echos in my brain!

[mum]

I like it, its like the heart and mind are fighting!
Short, sweet and straight to the battle of wrong and worse.

Thanks for sharing

[Tabby Mac]

Unique style. I like it. The poem is powerful too!
Tabby

[EcstaticEuphoria]

thanks so much tabby! I always appreciate your reviews!

[Asmae]

this style suits the poem really well, i liked it xx

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you! I appreciate the review!!

[Suhd]

Loved this style. It says so much, the repetition.
Keep sharing :)

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you suhd! Look forward to you reading more!

[Call me hopeless]

Gives off a great sense of contemplation and feeling lost

[EcstaticEuphoria]

thank you!

[WoodenChair]

Hey, just got a new fidget spinner and i absolutely love it but i love this poem more!

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Haha this comment makes my day! So glad to hear!

[wordman]

loved it,a slight studder as if you were holding back tears

[EcstaticEuphoria]

I love that you caught on to that! Thank you so much for your great reviews!

[wordman]

my pleasure

[rowan.taylorrr]

this is great!!! well done

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you so so much!