Wholeness True

Depth of contemplation...

What does it mean to feel this emotion?
The dialogue of this inner commotion
To slip,  to fall
To taste it all
The good and the abominable
To feel the depth and width of the imaginable

What could it mean if I too stumble?
Will my existence dissipate,  crumble
To hold it in
Or to start,  begin
To become myself, my wholeness true
To walk away from all I knew

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Your timpanic play with words strike the mind like cymbals, creating near crazed reactions.. increased heart beats! Musical, so musical and so finally conceived.
Perhaps contemplation jars the passive, gives power to where power's lacking.. who knows.
Stay, walk away - only Self controls decision. Perhaps.
You inspire thought, words, poetry in just about every corner of the mind. Smiling, no, no envy here! Much.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Emmajoy! Best review I've ever received! For someone to write poetry about my poetry, the best honor I've ever received. Thank you for making my day!

[Everett DeValle]

I truly love the delivery of your diction, as well as, the rhyme couplets...it truly works with this wonderful poem.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you so much! Your reviews are very heartfelt and appreciated

[Everett DeValle]

You are most welcome. :)