Eyes

The imagination of a lover.

Eyes, to me do captivate
Each a window to your soul
Your words, your breath does radiate
Emotion, passion to bestow

Eyes, dream now the dreams of lovers
Where each moment discovers
Each and every soft line retraced
The warmth, the knowing of your embrace

Reviews

[Writing Angel]

Wow.... I love how deep this is all of your work shows true talent ... maybe a little longer could really captivate the reader but other than that great work

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you so much! I will reevaluate it and maybe add to it. I really appreciate the feedback and encouragement!

[Writing Angel]

No problem if you want a specific piece reviewed you can send it to me or message me the title...glad I could help

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Oh awesome! I'd love to take you up on that, thank you very much!

[Writing Angel]

No problem