Yesterday

Of lies and promises...

Yesterday you said, I love you
Trust, with falseness bought
Pierced fragile heart right through
Today, those words forgot

Love's last petal fell
Crushed by your prose, counterfeit
This semblance covered; unforseen
My mind left solemn in this torment

Reviews

[Writing Angel]

The pain behind your words are terrible but you express them in an amazing way great work

[EcstaticEuphoria]

So grateful that you are enjoying reading and are felling the emotions. Always appreciated!

[Writing Angel]

your writing is well worth it

[J Johnson III]

Enjoyed reading. "Love's last petal fell." Favorite line.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you for your feedback! And thanks for reading, i hope you'll come back to read more😀