Cold Heart

Seduce me with your chill...

What memory of laughter?
Efforts wasted
Emptiness hereafter,
Affliction tasted

I am a stone
Love to me, misplaced
Again alone
No warmth of an embrace

Nourish my pain,
On darkness thrives
Your cold heart of icy rain
Seduce me, make me feel once more alive

Reviews

[Raven Wyntermoon]

What a lovely piece.
I like your usage of interweaving your rhythm on every other line.
A heart turned cold from other cold hearts...definitely an ill affliction indeed...
thank you for this thoughtful read.

[APOORVA]

nourish my pain.........
damn! this line explains it all
awesome...

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you so much! I appreciate all the encouragement 😁

[Krutika]

'On darkness thrives
Your cold heart of icy rain'
I like the way you played with the words here..Happy Writing :)

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you krutika! I appreciate the review! Happy writing back😊