Chase

I chase you in the silence of the streets.

Your smile is everywhere

And your curls are on every shoulder.

No summer breeze can explain to me

How you paint my night

With one ultimate desire,

To find you

While you constantly hide

And to kiss you

While you quickly depart.

Reviews

[no tell writer]

Such a beautiful and wonderful write

[J.P. Bristow]

Dreamy.....................

[Adam Whitworth]

you're good at this Nihad, i think you know.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

"And you curls are on every shoulder." --- 'you' should be 'your'

I feel the plaint of a heart that is grasping for a love just beyond reach. Just when you think you have it, it escapes you once again. Haunting you and beckoning you onward still. So near and yet so far.

[Sami Khalil]

A very sweet and lovely poem...Thank you for penning...:)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Another beautiful piece... So strong is the emotion in your work; so tangible are the directions of your desire. I think, perhaps, that in life we fear too much, and this fear leads us to isolation and indifference. A beautiful picture painted...