Secrets Of The Universe

a poem to my painting

Unce upon a time the story of life had begun

It started from one: the God of this planet that we called the Sun

A loyal great helper appeared then soon

To us he is known simply as moon

The two have seen from the beginning

All mighty cultures rise and fall

But have you noticed the true meaning

Of most corrupt and greedy of them all?

If not please take a nice advice:

Just stand right out and look around

Then you will see to great surprise

Future is now not otherwise

The point I’d like to get across

Is filled with secrets of the universe

And first key word in trinity

Is infinity

Reviews

[Stephen]

Lovely poem, i've never read such a master piece of art before ... I adore this poem. It's a combination of earthly powers on which the planet earth's alive. All the stanzas're very nice n in the IIIrd last stanza, I love your questioning to the greatest souls wandering around the world.
It's a creative poem, keep posting new stuffs. I've figured out that it's penned in 2013, hope to read your new stuffs soon before leaving the site.

[SonOfPlunder]

This is beautiful, the space imagery is really good. Nice work

[writ rajat]

the way is best,the rhyme is better,the technique is good, the feeling is excellent,highly decorated with imagination well this is very beautiful collection of lines

[Desiree B.]

Your third stanza points out a pretty interesting thought. I also enjoyed the rhyming that you did.
Aside from your poem, your painting is very cool. Its very busy with a lot of colors to hold my attention. :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Ohh I was mind boggled by your piece here, A real inspirational write my dear poetess friend :) very well done :)

[PurpleQuartz]

Great write!!! I enjoyed reading it!

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Making sense to me honestly and your ideas flow like a waterfall in this poem. Nice imagery in this sensational piece.

[sid]

Interesting thoughts nicely put together.