Dream

Being myself
Watching clouds in purple sky
Free among those clouds I fly
To you I come with no hello
And leave without goodbye

The golden light of fireflies
Is flowing by
Open your eyes
To see yourself
In dreams of mine

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Gorgeous!! As if ever-present and always never the interference, but the catalyst for freedom and peace. You speak of dreams as well as you have this way of causing my heart to almost "grieve" that it does not get to see such beauty in many poems, written in a way that allows for such sweet escapes!! ...and nothing changes you. You come full circle inside this realm of confident reality. Your dreams protect your days and vice versa. What you desire is as real as what can be dreamed up in short instances and applied to life, itself!! You are beautiful; this was a lot of fun..... xoxo -Mark

[Luke L]

Lovely imagery. You seem like a hippie, and I mean that in a positive way :). I like your hat, very stylish ;)

[junaid altaf]

i saw an orange sky
and a golden earth
i do want to fly
and known what is birth!
well composed

[Michael Soul]

very nice truly ;ike you're words x

[Sourav]

Very nice!

[Relic]

So well written. A wonderful poem.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I can listen to dreams all day, especially one like this! Well done!

[Royal Phoenix]

:)))) gracias!

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such a wonderful write here

[Acer]

The golden light of fireflies
Is flowing by
Open your eyes
To see yourself
In dreams of mine...
nice stanza, such a great peace '' & piece, well written.

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Ahh...

This is nice : )

[zainul]

Amazing imagery!
Marveled at the beauty.