Dream

Being myself
Watching clouds in purple sky
Free among those clouds I fly
To you I come with no hello
And leave without goodbye

The golden light of fireflies
Is flowing by
Open your eyes
To see yourself
In dreams of mine

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Gorgeous!! As if ever-present and always never the interference, but the catalyst for freedom and peace. You speak of dreams as well as you have this way of causing my heart to almost "grieve" that it does not get to see such beauty in many poems, written in a way that allows for such sweet escapes!! ...and nothing changes you. You come full circle inside this realm of confident reality. Your dreams protect your days and vice versa. What you desire is as real as what can be dreamed up in short instances and applied to life, itself!! You are beautiful; this was a lot of fun..... xoxo -Mark

[Kotryna]

Brilliant! This is a soul of a dreamer :)))

[A. Amos]

Simple, Pure, Raw yet extremely beautiful, loved it

[ayele marie dalmeida]

i love how the symbol of this poem is freedom. and i love how well you describe it. very well done :)

[lily]

This is such a gorgeous poem.
Well done :)

[Sarah Lynn]

It so creative ! I honestly just love it . Inspired me to make a poem about my dreams even !

[Royal Phoenix]

awww thanks, sweetie!

[Horizons]

Great structured write. Liked this short poem and your creativity. Dreams're the cause to be in life and live life more with some efforts and passion to fill the dreams. Everyone's got different-2 dreams but the one dream's common among all and it's "Freedom". Everyone wants freedom and without freedom there's no value of your life or your that dream you fill or you've filled. Nice work and message both're interesting and motivated. Excellent work.

[Royal Phoenix]

thank you so much! I completely agree with you!

[Dr. Wood ?]

ah if we could all share each others dreams....As we mingle in life....what a crazy world that might turn out to be......Dreamy poem

[Dhaye]

Lovely poem. I always love to dream. It is when I can do everything even the impossible.

Good job! :)

[Steven]

Nice write. Felt a bit like W C Williams. And I like the connection between fire flies and dreams.