Tricky

Unwillingly like under a spell

I remember your face

I remember your smell

Keep thinking of you days after days

With your name imprinted all over my brain

Is it a loss or a gain?

In all truth it is simply a game

Trickity tricks in your mind

I don't trip

I don't mind

I let go of the illusions long ago.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i agree with cord its very powerful, its also full of emotion also very romantic. Great little write enjoyed that read :)

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This is a very powerful piece. I love the emotions that lie behind the message. Great job, my dear :)

[Royal Phoenix]

Why thank you, dear!

[zainul]

It is a wonderful piece.
Use of words is amazing.
Love the expression:
"I let go of the illusions long ago."

[Royal Phoenix]

dats the trick ;)
Let go!
All I need is ME :)

[zainul]

Great trick indeed!