Nothing

Nothing

A Poem by RoxyKid101
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A short poem about loss and greif.

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Nothing.
All I have is nothing.
All I feel is nothing.
Nothing to numb the pain.
Nothing to move on to.
Nothing is quite as wonderful as you.
Nothing can replace you.
Nothing shall compare.
Nothing at all.
Nothing

© 2012 RoxyKid101


Author's Note

RoxyKid101
First poem, constructive feedback please!

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Nice work capturing the loneliness of loss. This is an excellent start for your first poem. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on August 9, 2012
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Tags: Loss, greif, teen, angst, short poem, nothing.

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RoxyKid101
RoxyKid101

I'm not quite sure...., As above., Australia



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