Magic 13

I really love this one. I wrote this not when I was 13, but was thinking of someone I knew, and then reflecting back at when I truly turned into a teenager. Sorta has a beatnik feel to it, but I love the flow of it for some reason

Magic 13. Contagious

Originality, inginuity is rampant.

The veils been dropped in the eyesight of our minds.

Magic 13. Everyones first love.

The number is the revelation of our worlds state.

Its open and blatent.

Coming of Age, so pure, so explosive.

The shattering of angelic state

the opening of my will so against

so strong

so dangerous

Magic 13 take it

Love or Hate

Author's Note

can ya feel it? *gives snaps* feel free to comment on what you think, how to improve it, how you feel about it when you read it, thoughts, anything.

Reviews

[Roxie Martelli]

I relate. 3 in general is my favorite number when paired with another odd number. Does that make sense? hah thank you!

[Brian Custer]

I felt reminiscent of 13. It is a bewilderment of mind and body, yet magical. It does have a beatnik feel and I can picture you standing at some coffee shop reciting like spoken word! Great piece, I really enjoyed it and not to mention, but my favorite number is 13.