War Song

A Poem by Roxie Martelli

This had potential when I wrote it. I think it just didn't really go through. Another one of those poems that were going to be songs things...

sometime in 06

Hear the scream of war
Hear the death of innocence
Hear her heart break from
the death of her people

I feel the beat of the war song
I hope this doesn't last long
My heart cries out for deliverance
Please come...

The worlds cry is loud
The wars cloud is dark
Lets stop this violence

© 2008 Roxie Martelli

Author's Note

And THIS is what happens when you listen to too much of "Eve of Destruction" by Barry Maguire

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Roxie Martelli

I agree. I'll make it a point to try and do that. Thanks a load!

Posted 15 Years Ago

coldust

it's good but seems incomplete. i bet you can finish it up more worthier...

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 31, 2008
Last Updated on December 31, 2008

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Roxie Martelli

Indio, CA

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Name:Roxanne D.O.B-1/4/1992 Location: Southern California (Coachella Valley) Education: Currently a Senior in High School I really love writing, and am not quite sure what my style is at this po.. more..