War Song

This had potential when I wrote it. I think it just didn't really go through. Another one of those poems that were going to be songs things...

sometime in 06

Hear the scream of war
Hear the death of innocence
Hear her heart break from
the death of her people

I feel the beat of the war song
I hope this doesn't last long
My heart cries out for deliverance
Please come...

The worlds cry is loud
The wars cloud is dark
Lets stop this violence
 

Author's Note

And THIS is what happens when you listen to too much of "Eve of Destruction" by Barry Maguire

Reviews

[Roxie Martelli]

I agree. I'll make it a point to try and do that. Thanks a load!

[coldust]

it's good but seems incomplete. i bet you can finish it up more worthier...