December winds

pretty sure there's a word or two here made up, but I won't change it, why? Its poetry!

4-28-07

December winds

A cool sense of remembrance
Washes over me. Leaving my mind
In time left behind. Stirring
My soul, closing my eyes to
let the memory shine.

I'm taken back to that
Time. Life was hectic but
Made so much sense.
I lived for freedom unkempt
Now my mind is my own demise, bringing down
And lifting up like a cruel trick. It gives me these
Memories. Never to live out
Again. I feel the cool touch
Of those December winds.
Bring me back again, Bring me back again

Author's Note

I'd love for some insight I suppose. Thoughts, ideas on improving etc. Don't flame for a made up word here or there. I'm still not entirely sure if unkempt is a word. haha!