Listen Up Because The Nightmare Is Choking Your Soul Chapter 2

Listen Up Because The Nightmare Is Choking Your Soul Chapter 2

A Chapter by Roxess
"

Listen up lovelies, this is how the game works, ether play along, or loose it with all of your might. Write me back or the game is done. In short. I. Win. P.s Don't Forget UW

"


Dear Luke Edwards
Whatever made you that dumb? How could you do that? You
 knew she was breaking apart, stabbing someone in the back is not a 
good thing to do when they are going crazy in the first place, and if
I can't make that clear then why do you not remember your past. Its 
true, Miley went way too far, but you really asked for it yourself when 
you cheated on her with her best friend and then proceeded to "Accidentally" Send love note that were meant for her best friend to her. I don't know if you needed entertainment or something, but you sure got action. Is that what you were looking for? All I have to say is that you did a really dumb thing and you need to be punished.
P.s Don't Forget UW

Luke read with horror filled eyes at what he read wondering how he could have ever done such a thing and who Miley was he looked down at the paper card stapled to the envelope. 'Go to main street, I have a present waiting for you there and leave a note' The card said in sharpie. His heart raced as he took out a piece of lined paper scribbling down a response to the note that he had received.

Dear UW,
I won't forget.

Luke folded the tiny note running to main street. A stench filled his nostrils as he looked down seeing a blood gushing body with acid burning skin. Luke gasped in shock dropping his note and ran with tears streaming down his face. He didn't notice what cruel sick joke this could have been but memories rushed through his head. Bad ones.


© 2013 Roxess


Author's Note

Roxess
Please tell me if you like it or not, to be truthful I don't even know where I am starting, or where I am going with this. I'm just making this happen and so if it is completely horrible please try to help me and forgive me.

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Ooooo...So THIS is where it's going. I love the gruesome detail about the "present". Not what I was expecting, truthfully, but definitely not disappointing. In fact, it adds a level of crazy to the story that I tend to enjoy. Check out my "Mr. Bob" shorts. I think you would like them

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roxess

11 Years Ago

There are going to be some more victims but I planned out today where I am going with it, and I hope.. read more
R. L. Hill

11 Years Ago

I can't wait to continue reading! I have adjusted my settings if you would like to browse my work no.. read more
Roxess

11 Years Ago

Okay :) thank you



Reviews

Ooooo...So THIS is where it's going. I love the gruesome detail about the "present". Not what I was expecting, truthfully, but definitely not disappointing. In fact, it adds a level of crazy to the story that I tend to enjoy. Check out my "Mr. Bob" shorts. I think you would like them

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roxess

11 Years Ago

There are going to be some more victims but I planned out today where I am going with it, and I hope.. read more
R. L. Hill

11 Years Ago

I can't wait to continue reading! I have adjusted my settings if you would like to browse my work no.. read more
Roxess

11 Years Ago

Okay :) thank you

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Added on November 27, 2013
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Roxess

Wonderland, WI



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Hey, I Roxapoxa131 A. K. A. Roxess, and that is not my real name, but I won't tell you it unless I trust you :D sorry yalls! Anyway, I love writing, drawing, singing, anime, reading ,playing on the in.. more..

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