In My Dreams

I saw you last night, even though you're far away.

We were laying in a field of white flowers,

In each other's arms and oblivious to the world around us.

You kissed me, I awoke and the dream was a distant memory.

I saw you last night.

I saw you in my dreams.

 

I saw you again today, as I stared idly out my window.

We were walking down the rocky shore of the lake,

Hand in hand just looking out over the glistening water.

You threw a rock into the lake, I awoke and the daydream faded.

I saw you today.

I saw you in my dreams.

 

I hope I see you again tonight, even though we're worlds apart.

Maybe we will be driving a country road or flying in a plane,

soaring high over the quilt-like landscape.

I know that I will have to awake but even that small time with you is worth it.

I hope I see you tonight.

I hope I see you in my dreams.

Reviews

[Madelaine]

Aw! Lovely write. It is very simple and heartfelt which I enjoyed. =) Love the format too, it made more of an impact. This is love sick, but in a demented happy way. Something that makes you so sick, it messes with your emotions and drives you to do the oddest things, and it really steers the thoughts going on in one's head. Someone reaching for the one who lives so far.

In a nutshell, I think it's a great poem. Hopefully you get what I was saying in that odd little paragraph. =S

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful expression of love, longing to be with the one you love even though they are far away! Each section of time moves so fluidly. So uplifting to read!

[M_S_Lay]

That was lovely.
The lonliness and love are quite evident in this work
Good write

[katiie]

i like the last two lines how they have meaning towards eachother each time.. ya kno?

lol but yess i like this one:] it makes it seem like your walking through the dream and you just dont want it to end, very cool!