She never says goodbye
A Poem by
Rossen
she never says goodbye
not really
her thief of time...
...waiting reflections of yesterday
gloss her chambray colored eyes she remembers the moments the flickering porch light shadow dancing moths imagined kisses and slow porch swings...
the taste of honey licked off the side of her hand the sensation of lemonade splashing her toes whispers of chimes past hang still...
© 2014 Rossen
Reviews
Beautiful imagery and a masterfully done piece.
Enjoyed it.
Thank you for sharing.
-Angad
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Angad, kind of you to say.
Beautiful imagery of memories. Wonderful poetry Rossen ^-^
-QuanaWana
Posted 10 Years Ago
Beautiful imagery of memories. Wonderful poetry Rossen ^-^
-QuanaWana
10 Years Ago
Smiling a mile,beautiful name,thank you
Some goodbyes are gritted through pain, but they are seldom meant that way. Beautiful poetry here.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Some goodbyes are gritted through pain, but they are seldom meant that way. Beautiful poetry here.
some memories tease us till death does us apart...beautiful lines :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
some memories tease us till death does us apart...beautiful lines :)
Stunning pace and made me smile...missed your work love, hope all is well? xoxo
Posted 12 Years Ago
Stunning pace and made me smile...missed your work love, hope all is well? xoxo
The word "Summer" resonates throughout this read, is it her name, the season or just the warm aura this exudes??
Posted 12 Years Ago
The word "Summer" resonates throughout this read, is it her name, the season or just the warm aura this exudes??
. wow ...
. stunning poetry ...
Posted 12 Years Ago
. wow ...
. stunning poetry ...
lemonade splashing her toes.. love it .. some people just can't say goodbye...
This poem is so beautiful like your soul. You do have the soul of a poet- I am happy to see this.
Chloe
Posted 12 Years Ago
lemonade splashing her toes.. love it .. some people just can't say goodbye...
This poem is so beautiful like your soul. You do have the soul of a poet- I am happy to see this.
Chloe
I get the sense of someone's life flashing before their eyes before they die.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I get the sense of someone's life flashing before their eyes before they die.
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Last Updated on June 26, 2014
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