Come Fly with Me

Come Fly with Me

A Poem by Rossen
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Believe in love...

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I have a jet pack waiting for you
We can do this thing I like to do...
Rolling boulders on the moon

Be my Wendy take my hand
Lets jet away to Neverland

I know of a hole in this atmosphere
 
We will pass through hot
Trust in me, close your eyes
Just think good thoughts

Come with me to see lunar heights
Believe in love, join me tonight

To pass as shooting stars
Two playful souls, 
two streaks of light

Come on now, we will be back soon
let me show you something new
like Rolling boulders on the moon
























 

© 2014 Rossen


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Beautiful! Great heartfelt write. you described love in away it took my breath away, if only we lived love like that. Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Truly stunning. If only we would trust enough to take the unfamiliar hand. Simple to describe the way love should always be. This one works through my core... for it is something I truly need to work on. Thank you for reminding me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautifully done Rossen! I love the tie in of Peter's whimsy to rolling moon rocks. Definitely made me smile and remember those days way back when, when love was new and anything was possible.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Fun ,Fun, Fun

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love it. HG Wells meets JM Barrie meets Rossen in creative Imagination face-off!?

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Gomer is no Peter Pan and likes Neverland, I am no Tinkerbell but love that atomosphere all so well.
This was beautiful Rossen, loved it.

Come with me to see lunar heights
Believe in love, join me tonight

To pass as shooting stars
Two playful souls, two streaks of light

and oh to reach those heights as two.
Wonderful piece, very clever



Posted 13 Years Ago


A little pixy dust and a whole lot of trust, let’s take this lust and turn it to love, “rolling boulders on the moon”…I love the whimsical fantasy feel this brings to the expression of love, truly this is at heights above cloud nine…

Great Write Rossen!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 13 Years Ago


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that's priceless...a delightful lighthearted poem..

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm smiling. This is a whimsical wish of a poem, playful and light, an utter delight! Truly creative and imaginative!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 26, 2011
Last Updated on February 22, 2014

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  Rossen
Rossen

Sebastopol, CA



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