Eternity's Chase...

Inspired by works of Liliana Negoi

Ten thousand harps, pluck one string
Porcelain shoulders, bare her wings
Powder white figure... moves with grace
Bluest moon, illuminates her chase...

A single chime renders her will
Lifetimes completed, infinity still...
~Wide gliding turns~  "circling time"
Soaring renditions, complete her rhyme

Spiraling forever... in a droplet of mist  .
(Worlds Within) ~ unlocked with a twist
Brandishing blades, full spectrums of light
Rays from the heavens, piercing the night

Her song is unyielding...calling your name
Three syllable's sung, all sounding the same
Guarding your mortality, wind in your place
Surrendering your essence, Eternity's chase...

Author's Note

Image by Rossen

Reviews

[Tommy]

Beautiful words expressed for a poetess of great talent. I do love reading Lilly's words as I do yours!

Great Write Rossen!
RLG,
Tommy

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

This is a gorgeous Ode. I have had the pleasure of reading some of the work from your Muse. Wonderful tribute. The reverence, respect, and admiration are so delicately, yet forcefully written...I am speechless.
You Rock!

[SpokenWord]

Rossen this is really good I like the form and poetic versus that reveil a true spirit of creativity on WC. I think you pinned her gracefully and perfectly defining the character, strength and creativity that she gives here. Excellent write.

[Karina Longo]

It sounds like a serenade to me - it's absolutely beautiful. What a wonderful imagery.

[Lilly Negoi]

and i get to write the first review :)
the way you describe my world with everything in it is beautiful - and i'm really flattered :). thank you!
(i do have a powder white figure, don't i?! :) )