Eternity's Chase...

Inspired by works of Liliana Negoi

Ten thousand harps, pluck one string
Porcelain shoulders, bare her wings
Powder white figure... moves with grace
Bluest moon, illuminates her chase...

A single chime renders her will
Lifetimes completed, infinity still...
~Wide gliding turns~  "circling time"
Soaring renditions, complete her rhyme

Spiraling forever... in a droplet of mist  .
(Worlds Within) ~ unlocked with a twist
Brandishing blades, full spectrums of light
Rays from the heavens, piercing the night

Her song is unyielding...calling your name
Three syllable's sung, all sounding the same
Guarding your mortality, wind in your place
Surrendering your essence, Eternity's chase...

Author's Note

Image by Rossen

Reviews

[Gomer LePoet]

Superb! Awesome! Enjoyable read. the flowing of these words was like sitting on a hill overlooking the water, while a gentle breeze flowed cooling the skin.

[Ladysue]

lyrical and amazing!!!!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lyrical tribute filled with power and grace~

[Emily B]

I love Fire Woman's review, your words do bend and flow

[An owl on the moon]

Each line is remarkable... a world unto itself.. And when blended this carries with it a song over the ages.. beautiful essence of eternity. Vivid and filled with life.

[?]

This was really beautiful. Flow was awesome and I do love your rhyming.
Love the title and how you ended it with those same two words.

Very nice

Lovely work my fried ... and I find it much more so because this is in my favorite rhythm and rhyme format which has been maintained very well throughout this poem .

[Maureen Mwaniki]

Ths really is beautiful!sweet flowing words,with a certain grace and tendernes that just overwhelms you...its breathtaking!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

You do rock and so does your poetry.

Chloe

[FireWoman]

Flows like a stream, and bends in all the right places.