Eternity's Chase...

Inspired by works of Liliana Negoi

Ten thousand harps, pluck one string
Porcelain shoulders, bare her wings
Powder white figure... moves with grace
Bluest moon, illuminates her chase...

A single chime renders her will
Lifetimes completed, infinity still...
~Wide gliding turns~  "circling time"
Soaring renditions, complete her rhyme

Spiraling forever... in a droplet of mist  .
(Worlds Within) ~ unlocked with a twist
Brandishing blades, full spectrums of light
Rays from the heavens, piercing the night

Her song is unyielding...calling your name
Three syllable's sung, all sounding the same
Guarding your mortality, wind in your place
Surrendering your essence, Eternity's chase...

Author's Note

Image by Rossen

Reviews

[...]

. absolutely stunning poetry ... just so amazingly beautiful ...
. i love every word and every line and ever image ...

[Desert Dreamer]

Mythical, I feel as if i am trapped in a place where time has stopped, watching time flow around me, hearing the song of time.

[Ruth]

Rossen, love, your work always infuses such beauty! The infinity of the universe held within passionate heartfelt words! Beautiful love, stunningly beautiful! xx

[.]

it's meter and rhyme is a delight to read..your words colourful in expression..

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

brilliant

[Dane Osborne]

Oh this is cool. This had a whimiscal and dreamlike flow. It had quite a classical feel and sucked me in. Excellent flow.

[Tina Kline]

In your poem I read a story of an female immortal creature searching for love or something she thinks is love over time and space, always searching and perhaps never finding. Very beautiful imagery and words in your poem. Very well written too I think. It was a job to read.

[Robin]

her rhyme goes beyond words , spirit captured ~