Silky Whispers

part of the late night poetry with Rossen collection

when you sleep

you make funny sounds
 
your hair takes on, new ground

brushing my chest chin and lips

soft aromatic sounds abound

silky whispers

fall from rolling shoulders

hair that says run through me run

pull me taunt then let me flow

feel me... touch this minxish glow

I close my distance

inhale you in

breath the aroma

under my chin

glide with passion

I dance within

Reviews

[Arielle Ann]

beauty! I could almost sense the pleasant aroma of he tresses when I was reading this.expresses the longing of a man for a woman's long hair beautifully in a gentle though sensuous manner!

[Desert Dreamer]

Beautiful! I have a fondness for long hair and sleeping, I feel this deeply, such a pleasure to read.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

absolutely divine! I love the way you describe how a woman's hair calls out to be touched........

[Robin]

fabtastic photo that melds perfectly with this poetic glide through a dreamy night

[KAREN]

Beautiful write, I myself was dancing within from the enjoyment of your poem!!

[M.Babu]

WOW. I felt like i was beside her beautiful figure and flowing hair.

You've painted a great picture with your well chosen words here. I've candidly experienced the emotion, the tone of awe .The tone of being breath taken at stunning beauty leaves a similar effect. Well done! This is one of your best works to me so far:) MAGNIFICENT

[SpokenWord]

beautifully written and expressed. sensual at it's best.

[?]

oh so sensual, romantic. I agree with kyncan the first few lines made me chuckle and then, and then, wow it turned to be so sensual, the flow was wonderful.

[Deviant Works]

I loved the first two lines. They were adorable and made me laugh.:) And then it got serious and sensual, a slow drip of utter sexiness. I love hair! Which sounds really weird to say.:) But I do. Especially..."hair that says run through me run pull me taunt me then let me flow feel me...touch this minxish glow" Loved this and the image is incredible.

[Karina Longo]

I like how you manage it to be a sensual, not necessarily erotic piece. 'Silky Whispers' - the title itself is warm and seduces one with curiosity, leading to this beautiful piece full of real poetic detail.