Only in the rain

bouncing droplets of...

 

                                                    

                                                      

                                                       she

                                             

                                            never kisses

                                        me without a dew

                                      she gives me pleasure

                                               In the oddest way

                                                      like her hair flip 

                                                              turning away

                                        we kiss so passionately...

                           only in the rain

                         no love for me,

                        dry is my bane

                       playful kissing, 

                       fostered by the lightest mist...

                                                       if sprinkles should dot her lips                                                                           

                                                   I taste her magic,so truly missed

                                           only pouring rain can release our pain

                                                   crashing thunder from far away

                                               more time to love her in this day

                            the wetter she is...

                              the deeper we kiss

                                 she kisses me insane

                                      never in sunshine

                                               only in the rain 

                                                                      

                                                                                               

Reviews

[KAREN]

Great write! Great emotions flowing!
Love the last lines of the poem!

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lovely, really romantic..loved it!!

[Lilly Negoi]

"the wetter she is... the deeper we kiss
she kisses me insane
never in sunshine
only in the rain"
these are some sigh-drawing lines...

[?]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOH so nice, the poem, the rain, the kiss.
Beautiful, sensual and even a lil romantic.
I especially like the ending, perfect ending to a wonderful piece

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful poem and I did see it typed in form of a droplet which adds a nice touch .. however it is not needed to read this and see and feel what a wonderful write it is.
Rain and kisses go together in many ways.
"She never kisses me without a dew" love that line.
I think this is one of your best... truly.

Chloe

[pheasant]

a staggering piece of work

[FireWoman]

My favorite of yours, gorgeous thought process~

[Emily B]

lovely passionate words

Ahh .. nice work ... but what is most lovely here is the ending ...

the wetter she is... the deeper we kiss
she kisses me insane
never in sunshine
only in the rain

I find this very very lovely , it reads like a song .
I would like to know what you tried to mean by :

"...dry is my bane.."

And I am also very curious to know why such formatting of the poem (i.e. the placement/arrangement of the lines ) :) :)