Only in the rain

bouncing droplets of...

 

                                                    

                                                      

                                                       she

                                             

                                            never kisses

                                        me without a dew

                                      she gives me pleasure

                                               In the oddest way

                                                      like her hair flip 

                                                              turning away

                                        we kiss so passionately...

                           only in the rain

                         no love for me,

                        dry is my bane

                       playful kissing, 

                       fostered by the lightest mist...

                                                       if sprinkles should dot her lips                                                                           

                                                   I taste her magic,so truly missed

                                           only pouring rain can release our pain

                                                   crashing thunder from far away

                                               more time to love her in this day

                            the wetter she is...

                              the deeper we kiss

                                 she kisses me insane

                                      never in sunshine

                                               only in the rain 

                                                                      

                                                                                               

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

the wetter she is... the deeper we kiss
she kisses me insane
never in sunshine
only in the rain
This was divine

[Poeticadia]

I love the form... a kiss in the falling rain... and the way the whole idea is encapsulated in those last 3 lines... and the beautiful, tender and passionate language that expresses itself so magically.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a lovely pane of glass to drip the kiss across~ gorgeous composition~

[Sel Whiteley]

What an ode to the love that is only possible in the rain. Love the structure of this, the way it reflects rain/mist and of course all the water can become metaphor for.

[LA Lorena]

This is just a breath of fresh air. A truly lovely write Rossen, I think it is one of your best. I like that you are not afraid to be tender and romantic, expressive and fragile. This sets your work apart.

[WonderWhy]

I haven't yet...but I will. Someday.

I actually love the rain, especially when I can stay in bed all day. Nicely written.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

loved this especially "she kisses me insane"

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sometimes it is more the moment than the people involved... a nicely romantic piece... I love the rain.

[Maureen Mwaniki]

Why the arrangement?dsnt even matter
that last stanza...*sigh*
sweet,sensual..a touch of romance i like this poem

[Madison A. Wright]

im feeling a bit wet standing in the rain now.. the wetter the better.. i love stormy nights.. now i love em even more.. thank you for sharing this..