Only in the rain

bouncing droplets of...

 

                                                    

                                                      

                                                       she

                                             

                                            never kisses

                                        me without a dew

                                      she gives me pleasure

                                               In the oddest way

                                                      like her hair flip 

                                                              turning away

                                        we kiss so passionately...

                           only in the rain

                         no love for me,

                        dry is my bane

                       playful kissing, 

                       fostered by the lightest mist...

                                                       if sprinkles should dot her lips                                                                           

                                                   I taste her magic,so truly missed

                                           only pouring rain can release our pain

                                                   crashing thunder from far away

                                               more time to love her in this day

                            the wetter she is...

                              the deeper we kiss

                                 she kisses me insane

                                      never in sunshine

                                               only in the rain 

                                                                      

                                                                                               

Reviews

[Frieda P]

A bit quirky, romantic with a stirring twist, I like this one a lot.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I like the idea of this one...very unique. She only kisses you deeply in the rain, which metaphorically symbolizes the juxtaposition between tragedy and beauty; only in the darkest hours is the light most piercing when it rises. There is also a unique lyrical quality to this one, which I enjoyed. I think, overall, this was well done.

[Thornbirds]

Thumbs up on this incredibly romantic piece, like holding velvet with ones eyes.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Revisiting this piece is more enchanting the second time around... after a dry spell, you can't help but miss the rain...

Truly Romantic!~xoxo~:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

This is adorable and beautifully penned and I love how your poem takes the shape of a droplet of rain..

YB

[Corset]

This is beyond gorgeous. so many beautiful lines, everyone a delight to read and envision. going into favorites!

[Clockwork]

She seems like a truly mystifying and illusive love. The feel I get is that her moods, the eye of her passions, is like the weather we see here. Only when the clouds of her passions are heavy does she come to love the speaker, and not a moment before. That makes her wild and unpredictable, but quite a force to love in return. I liked how you brought us this rain shower of her personality.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the passion of this...and...really love the line "she kisses me insane/...only in the rain"

[Ravyne Hawke]

I can understand why this would be a favorite, Rossen.. it is so intense with passion. Love all of it, but the last few lines blew me away. Well done, dear.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh my... this is...well, this is simply Breathtaking!... I'm speechless, which is rare for me...the one word that comes to mind is "Exquisite"...

I love the rain and all the wonderful emotions it conjurs...

"only pouring rain can release our pain
crashing thunder from far away
more time to love her in this day

the wetter she is... the deeper we kiss
she kisses me insane
never in sunshine
only in the rain" ~This is an Exquisite write... :)