Only in the rain

bouncing droplets of...

 

                                                    

                                                      

                                                       she

                                             

                                            never kisses

                                        me without a dew

                                      she gives me pleasure

                                               In the oddest way

                                                      like her hair flip 

                                                              turning away

                                        we kiss so passionately...

                           only in the rain

                         no love for me,

                        dry is my bane

                       playful kissing, 

                       fostered by the lightest mist...

                                                       if sprinkles should dot her lips                                                                           

                                                   I taste her magic,so truly missed

                                           only pouring rain can release our pain

                                                   crashing thunder from far away

                                               more time to love her in this day

                            the wetter she is...

                              the deeper we kiss

                                 she kisses me insane

                                      never in sunshine

                                               only in the rain 

                                                                      

                                                                                               

Reviews

[lightsong]

I'm amazed! really amazed! when I first opened this poem my eyes where like "WOW" to see Your big beautiful drop, then as I started reading, I was again really amazed by the words and how perfectly, thoughtfully, meaningfully, profoundly, enchantingly... mystically filling that drop!

That's true creativity! Thank You for such treat!

[Matching Socks]

A very lovely poem, mysterious and romantic.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Steamy Passionate nicely done.


I love the rain it can be very romantic.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.




blessings. kindred poet

[Frontier]

Very interesting, that it is only in the rain...

[livetowrite]

Very steamy. I loved the way this was layed out

[MsJewel]

Soft and sensual, your words float across the page almost as if a raindrop is falling...
beautiful writing my friend. Going in my library!

:) Julie

[Ken Simm.]

What a singularly beautiful write. This is as exqusitly coloured as one of your raindrops caught in the light.

[PurpleQuartz]

Wow so beautiful and powerful. I love how you captured the whole essence of the poem with the words, ''never in sunshine
only in the rain''
Very brilliant Rossen!!

[Bright Ocean Star]

Is this a metaphor for the poetic muse? When it rains, it pours, and she showers you with her affections. When it's dry, she's cold and withdrawn? Just wondering....a wonderful, whimsical, love-lorn write. Thank you, Rossen. I love this one.