Tear Tangled Lashes

Blurry gaze through
tear tangled lashes
soul filled dew
longest drawn out night...

heart pumping tears
down brackish streams
pouring through the
corners of her sight

pool of sorrow slips
her cupeled  palms
gentle drops freckle
this silk gown tonight

finger tips brushing
tears pass temples
salty saturated skin
gleams in candle light

opening dark shutters
pass billowing sheers
she now sees todays
dawning light so bright

stepping on to her balcony
fresh cool wind dries
her tired and lovely
mourning eyes...

Reviews

[Dane Osborne]

Excellent. I was swayed and sucked in by the flow of your words. It took a describtion of an everyday experience and made something unworldly and hazily whimisical out of it. The ability to do such is clear sign of a true writer. Keep in there and keep learning and you'll do great things with your stuff. P.S Don't ever say you won't get published, i've been published and I can tell you that you have all the potential to be to. Kudos

[Tommy]

Wow Rossen, this is nice! As always your images are stellar, but your words make this one come alive, and I love it!

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

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A sad but beautiful write.
wow this could have been about me a few weeks ago. lol
But hey, Nothing lasts forever - not even your troubles
Very descriptive, good flow, loved it.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Beautifully described heart ache to the realization that life must go on. Greatly described and wonderful work!

[KAREN]

So sad, but it is a beautiful write! I can feel her sadness, you did an outstanding job as always!!

[Madison A. Wright]

rossen i always feel power from your words.. you have the swagger and the swiftness of writing poems that always carries me on a nice ride..

[OT]

very nice write!! silky smooth descriptions here!

[Lilly Negoi]

skilled pen you have dear friend ....:)

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what an exquisite way to describe the tears of a mournful woman...delightful