Heavens gift

Thank you Emily Burns

feather
falling gracefully
earthly bound
thermal drifting
slowed by clouds
filled with tears
of the sky
gusty wind
a whirling quick
soft shadow
drifting over
broken sprits
reaching fingers
touches down
found by a quill
words flow
poets eyes...





 

Reviews

[MuSe Ampoule]

Beautiful work Rossen! You've really impressed me (and most likely so many others) with your wonderful works honoring and respecting other writers on this sit. You are showing all of us such kindness!

This is a beautiful tribute to Emily and well deserved at that. Thank you for all you do to show light and kindness here!

[Dane Osborne]

Shakespeare had scary f*****g eyes. BTW great poem 100/100

[Tate Morgan]

Ah hat was a beautiful thought I liked that alot

[FireWoman]

You transcend the simple feather falling. It takes on a life of its own and becomes art all inside of your eyes. Nicely written.

[Joiedevivre]

ah! a great idea captured in flowing and inspired verse.

[Winslow Des Totes]

I love how you took a simple feather and gave it history and power through the poets hands. I too have written about pencils and pens and how they, like an artist brush, are the instruments of our voice. Wonderful piece! :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

liked it

[northern monkey]

Sublime. Thanks for sharing this with us.

[An owl on the moon]

What a perfect reflection this creates.. gentle feather becoming the tool of a writer's heart and mind... breathed on page. Profoundly spoken.

[?]

Beautiful piece Rossen, love the imagery