Tilt

part of the late night poetry with Rossen collection

nuzzling now, my nose down your side
roaming your soft rolling hills
heat of my touch to be realized
tiny kisses dot your hip your to thighs
pleasures to treasure await moaning cries
tilting your head softly closing your eyes
the music begins when I twirl inside
sweet poetry of passion pacing the tide

Author's Note

Dare You

Reviews

[Deviant Works]

"roaming your soft rolling hills" Oh, just roam! And I do hope someone gets sidetracked along the way! "the music begins, while I twirl inside" You naughty-naughty man you!:) I don't care, I am sure this piece is meant to be slow and sensual but to me I found this as a huge invite for play time. "sweet poetry of passion pacing the tide" Those are waves meant to be surfed to the very end! Hot and steamy, Rossen. Another fav!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Nice word construction. Dare I say 'Cunning Linguist.'

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

"Late night poetry with Rossen"..(was thinking of the late show with David Letterman) (I do get offtrack)
This is tasteful erotica (no pun intended).. really sensual and sexy.
I love the last line ..'sweet poetry of passion pacing the tide'...

Chloe

[Ladysue]

nice title and good late night poetry..this flowed beautiful in a sensual tone...wonderfully done...

[Lilly Negoi]

getting more sensual by the day, aren't you? :) i bet all ladies reading this sighed :D

[MuSe Ampoule]

Lovely short, sensual piece. This sizzles! I'll have pleasant dreams tonight, for sure! :D

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pleasures to treasure await moaning cries

tilting your head softly closing your eyes
the music begins, while I twirl inside
sweet poetry of passion pacing the tide

oh wow, just wow!!!
This sure says alot. WOW! I need a cold drink,
Steamy, sensual, wheeeeeeeew
Awesomely wonderful