Dark Pleasure

part of the late night poetry with Rossen collection

           Her crippling stare is like a warning

                         The deep circles swirl around those

                                Dark still  eyes

                         She eliminates souls from close encounters

                 Somehow I stand within her electric blue mist

           Moonlight  slips through the half open blinds

            Her naked goth pail body, half in soft shadow

              lust pulls my focus out of the blur

              Sending blood to the awaiting member

                 The soft gleam of light from

                 the side of her breast

          
                         Taunting my will...
       

       Both frozen still within this cold empty space

Without a word... I Undress...

With a sharp stare she delivers her warning

Some time passes

Speechless... Ive been muted

I lay on my back on the hardwood floor

Close my eyes

Holding my breath... I wait to see what will...

Soft stroking finger tips,

Across my eyelids

I can feel her exhale... absent of warmth

Wet darting feeling on the nape of my throat

My heart is heaving not beating

My hands rest... open palms, knuckles touching the floor..

She is.. devouring me...

Author's Note

who is she to you?

Reviews

[Rory CJ Frankson]

************************************************************* All Stars *****************************

SMOKIN... as I was reading I was really impressed with the staging of this piece Ros, it holds areas of real mistique, intrugue and sultry suspence.
I like what PJ mention about the Vampirish feel and it being suptle and not outwardly stated. To mention in messaging that there is like a suspension between some of these phrases, that leave us rather breathless. Erotic, without going over the top and I like that. Over all, I would have to say this is a great write and I think you have a niche here that suits your writing style... this piece is delicious.
Right On / Write On!
Romon in Review

[Lilly Negoi]

mmm, the most sensual "black widow" i ever read about! :) very nice!

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sensational!! sensual, dark and delicious! Love the idea that your not sure whether she's a vampire (or suchlike) or really a sexy woman!!! Either way it's incredible

[Magdelena]

Wonderful! Now this was a write that touched my heart. it was purity, simplicity and steamy, yet oh so done in a way that made the imagination work, not the opposite. Well done, or may i say BRAVO?

I am indeed impressed.

Mags xx

[OT]

haha you've definitely slain the "sing songs" here!! a very steamy affair this is! yet not overly explicit - very well written, with great descriptions - an alluring read telling tales of passion!! nice!