On cosmic flowers

for Chloe..Across the Universe

This is the story of the honey potion bee

She crosses the universe for you and for me

When cosmic flowers are ready to bloom

Call out to her she will begin to loom

Powerful honey potion she will pour in your ear

Her message is so reassuring so calm and clear

She crosses the universe and circles for fun

Touching cosmic flowers as they rise with our sun

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Rossen,
Well here I am reading a new poet; you of course! Thanks for writing this happy poem. It is so nice to enjoy simple and positive- sunshiny thought processes such as "On cosmic flowers." Here are some little tidbits taken here; "honey potion bee crosses the universe for you and for me..cosmic flowers are ready to bloom..powerful honey potion she will pour in your ear.. her message, so reassuring, calm, clear...crosses the universe..circles for fun the last line is just whimsical! "Touching cosmic flowers as they rise with our sun." this poem inspired me so. The beauty of sharing inspiration is what I took this writing to mean and it was very good for my heart to receive. Thank you! Blessings to you Kathy

[Kristallo]

This is lovely and imaginative.

[Dane Osborne]

This is rather hard for me to relate to because I always liked to pour oil on flowers and kill bees with a fly swatter. But I still like it anyway so 100/100

[Siddhartha]

Oh, beautiful.This has a grandeur to it that is as captivating as it is enchanting.

[Sethnicity]

Once again I'm impressed, Close to my heArt you bloom with words simply put you conjure bliss... "When cosmic flowers are ready to bloom".... And I'm a Cosmic flower ready to Shroom!

[Emily B]

oh, wow!

[Hayley]

This is so cool. And bees are super cool. Bees and space, wonderful mixture. I especially like the last line.

[HoorayForUnderdog]

Beautiful story here -- I like the idea of cosmic flowers -- and whispers of honey scented reassurance -- lovely

[Magdelena]

Wonderful imagery, inspiring in fact! I so love how the title made all seem to float...

That wonderful honey bee sure is that, truly delightful indeed.

Mags xx

[Robin]

this is great , honey potion is strong stuff ~