Poetry like dancing

A collaboration with Ms Jewel

“  Poetry like dancing

twirls on a breeze, as soft as sonnet

the wind in my hair, your breath on my neck….”

 

 

A million white lights, a sparkling blur

interlacing lines of heaven and her 

small circles of paradise that mean so much

swayed by the gentle rhythm felt in her touch

 

She counts my heartbeat, timing our grooves

I’m true to her form, unfurling her moves

Tip toeing stanzas on stairways to dreams

Eyes veiled with whispers, melting at the seams 

 

The scent of her hair, the touch of her skin

Arouses my senses, passion rushes in

As swift as the night, as soft as the beat

Of sensuous rhyme in a sweet repeat

 

Twilight’s upon us, yet love lingers on

In beauty, two poets dancing ‘til dawn

 

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

I love it! You two did a great job. I love the dancing metaphor; its very appropriate. I love the rhythm and sway of the words. You can visualize two people dancing close and turning as one, minding each other's toes. There are so many corresponding nuances between writing together and dancing together. Beautiful!

[Rossen]

Nice to dance with a partner,was fun to do..thanx dear friend.

[Bright Ocean Star]

you are welcome...:)

[Corset]

how very romantic, and sensual as well, You two tango very nicely together!

[Rossen]

Thank you,Corset Julie "a polished gem dancer" makes poetry seem effortless...

[Corset]

a good partner makes a big difference, though you are every bit as talented, it's impossible to tell where one picks up and the other lets off.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the invitation to collaborate with you on this beautiful poem. You are a pleasure to write with - so very talented - A lovely experience and a lovely poem.

:) Julie

[Rossen]

You rock Julie!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think you two are perfectly in step with each other...no stepping on each other's lines.

love to dance and love to read this kind of poetry that dances off the page.

[Ruth]

Words of sheer beauty! Fantastic collaboration...left me tingly and warm ♥

[Rossen]

Thank you, for your warm kindness...

[Ruth]

My pleasure xo