justa sitten in my truck

you're always on my mind

no more thinkin bout you

while I ride my tractor over things

fishin without bate

thinkin bout you

always late... gota get this miiiind straight

from tide to tide to tide... all you

kinda wonderful though...

just layin in the bed of my truck

daydreamin bout honey colored hair

and the look on your face every time

a flower opens its pretty little head...

yep...thinkin bout you now...

Reviews

[R J Askew]

Arf, arf, love it .. esp the idea of fishing without bait! But the best part is the way the poem swiftly shifts from a sort or resigned denial straight back into love dreamin'!

[Rossen]

Thank you,one of my favorites that somehow wrote itself..

[PurpleQuartz]

This is so sweet and it follows along a thought as it changes. As much as we try our minds always go back to the ones we love.
100/100

[Ruth]

Wow - this is beautiful imagery and an emotive poem! To be so thoughtful of someone like this is touching! Beautiful hon! xx ♥

[Bright Ocean Star]

very nice, Rossen. What a very sweet, adorable poem. Love the imagery. It melts your heart. Great write!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like the dialect in this...a sweet love poem.
that very real kind.

[Rossen]

Thank you, can't help but to break a few g's off now and then.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Funny how we say I am not thinking about something and then realize that at that second we are doing what we said we would not.You seem to be thinking about her all the way through lol.Great one my friend :)

[Rossen]

Thank you Vidya, yes sometimes it's just to hard not to..

[Vidya Bacchus]

I understand.You are welcome :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Amazing how a 'thought' can stir an emotion dormant in the mind..as your mind wonders deep in though bringing back memories of a time when.... your thoughts were once a reality....

Loved your words penned wonderfully in this endearing poem Rossen...

YB

[Rossen]

Why thank you YB, land here anytime ! I enjoy all of your words...

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your welcome Rossen and I enjoy all your works of art too on here... have a great day..