Heartbreak Bus Stop

One Sunday afternoon
Followed her down at the stop
Never given a chance to be near
Nor for her to lend me an ear

She took the afternoon bus
Undoubtingly never turning her back
Even with the thinnest slice of sight
Leaving the free wind hitting my face

It drove away so slowly
With red lights waving goodbye
No other words slipped away
As I rode homeward that quiet Sunday

Author's Note

Please review and rate my poem. Thank you :)

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was short and sweet, all your poems are quite short but they tell such sweet little story's :)
I enjoyed this read was filled with emotion and longing.
It was kinda sweet and romantic in a way, tells a tale of a guy lusting over a woman and secretly following her being struck by her beauty and presents.
Wonderful write :)

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Hahaha, thanks for the review!! Have a great day!! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Anytime your welcome. You to :)

[BlaqkShadow]

Such a pretty poem with such meaning behind it. There is a whole story within these words that intrigues me as all your work does. Excellent X

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Tnx for your review :) Please like my page in Facebook, "Poetry In The Dark".. Tnx :)

[Aman samrat khare (ASK)]

Short poem with sweet meaning to it great work

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Thanks for the review :)