Life In A Moment

Smile just a little bit
Pretend until you can't
Cry until you drown
Sink into yourself

Empty photographs
People walking through you
This moment till tomorrow
Will fade out in the end

Restless world you're living
Tomorrow is just the same
Such a pretty anxiety
You die to feel alive

Beneath your stains
And shadow of your soul
You counted all your pain
The only thing that's real

All you have become
And everything you have
Will be washed away
Later in the end

You may think it seems wrong
But it gets right till it hurts
Sometimes you try again
But it doesn't kill at all

And through it all
It's just you and you
The moment you live
Will fade out in the end

Author's Note

Please review and rate my poem. Thank you :)

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is pretty good, tells quite the story about moments in life. For some reason i really liked the first part allot.
Smile just a little bit
Pretend until you can't
Cry until you drown
Sink into yourself

Very poetic poem, really flows great and sounds very poetic the way its been written out.
I enjoyed it quite a bit.
Keep writing :)

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Thanks for the review!! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your very much welcome :)