The Ballad Of The White Rose And The Raven

Everything is new to see
Like a child under the sun
All are dangerously beautiful
Even a policewoman equipped with a gun

Step outside while summer time's in bloom
Look at the lonely rose that ever grows
Wasting his time watching birds fly by
Until the raven came near the white rose

Nothing is real except for the two
He blooms as she blindly ignores him
Nothing is left except for their strange names
Only witnesses are the clouds of cream

It seems like no one really cares
Empty and nothing to say
In this hot and freezing afternoon
The white rose died as the raven flew away

Author's Note

Please review and rate my poem. Thanks :)

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

Such a stunner of a piece mate, the contrast between the light and the dark are well represented in your well chosen words. There are some sharp and passionate words in there that give the poem a lot of life, wonderful XxXx

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Thanks for the review :)

[Aventicus]

It would seem even the universe is against innocent beauty, allowing that which is dark to live on, unharmed. But let me ask you, is all beauty innocent?

[Ross Emerson Realino]

For me, it's a No.. There is nothing left innocent in this world. Even the most kind or beautiful people in the world aren't innocent :)