The Raven

Whenever you are near
Too blind to look into your eyes
You must be a heaven sent
The unreachable, the unattainable

As I write this trash of poetry
I can see that you are right next to me
Only in my fictious dreams
Somewhere lonely, somewhat solitary

I have forgotten to find you
But our roads keep on intertwining
Fly away anywhere you want to
For you will always be my wonderwall

Author's Note

Please review and rate my poem. Thank you :)

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

Wonderful :) I like the personal and raw feel the poem has, there's real feeling behind the words, my favourite lines are "I have forgotten to find you
But our roads keep on intertwining ", it's very powerful and I think also shows the random nature of life and love. Excellent work :D XxXx

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Thank you for your review. The poem is really personal for me.
Tnx again and God Bless :)