Aftermath

She was an angel to me, a devil inside
A flash of a thunder burning in me
She did everything to tear me apart
And break apart all that I am

Time heals me again and again
Until I'm comfortably numb
And I was too dumb to know
That I was running around her hands

She gave the heaven to me
But all it was inferno blazing on me
All that I care and want for her to be
Were all just wasted away by her stupid innocense

But I won't let this build up inside me
Never to let her live in me anymore
All that I know is she never existed
Time and effort were all just wasted

Author's Note

Please review and rate my poem. Thank you!!!

Reviews

[Emily]

I just love that first line!
Keep it up!

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Thank you very much!!! :)

[B]

No one can take away anything from you without your consent
Rising above it all
I see much strength in your brave words
A new beginning and an endless sense of self love is what makes a true fighter ......

Her loss :)

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Hahaha!!! Tnx for your review...
:)

[pikachulover]

Hmm...Inferno...I guess the poem is an inferno lol ( kidding). I found anger and regret, a juxtaposing poem. Well-penned, keep on.. and thanks for sharing!

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Thank you very much!!!

[Willard Wells]

Sounds like love gone wrong or one way love. Nice writing. Thanks,

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Thank you very much for your review. Your review will help me improve my poetry. Please review my other poems too. Tnx a lot!!! :)

[Willard Wells]

I am sure I will read more, but reading is a two way street. I review new poets I have not read and will read more only if it is mutual. Thanks and have great day.