Your Chinky Eyes

Your eyes were made in heaven
Shimmering beyond the vanilla skies
Taking me a ride above the cloud nine
And crashes me back to where I was
A place where dreams are unsure
And nothing is left to hear but broken strings

But they are now all taken away
By someone who's in the same town we're living
I know this fantasy will unconsciously end
I'm as helpless as a blind man walking on fire
What a strange kind of joy it brings
When I get drowned looking into your chinky eyes

Author's Note

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Reviews

[B]

A flirtatious write
love the chinky eyes

And i love the energy of this piece

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Thank you for your wonderful review. Please review my other poems too. Tnx!!!

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