A Damn School Day

How well did you learn?
All you've done with your eyebrow is to burn
They teach and educate
On how to get soaring scores and rate

You never knew the reason behind the subject
All you did is to stuck it in your head to be perfect
Since the day you learned how to read and write
Still confused what is wrong and right

Reality is merely an illusion
The wise man said with a perfection
They give exams without a sound
All they do is count the answers you've found

Students gather in their classes
Just like pigs inside tall fences
Stuck inside these four corners
As teachers dictate their orders

Blackboard turns into bloody white
As students start to damnly write
Recitations are echoes of death
As you smell your classmate's breath

Knife cuts you as you see her with another
And people will think that you are bitter
You will know that she's not waiting for you
But for someone that will give a clue

Bring home the pile of homeworks
Burn them and see how it works
Dig a pit for the projects
And set a burial mass for all subjects

Then you started to crawl homeward
As people think you're a coward
Red smoke start to rise in your eyes
And for you to sleep is my only advice

Author's Note

Please review and rate my poem. Thank you!!!

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was my favorite line:
Since the day you learned how to read and write
Still confused what is wrong and right.
I like the way you have described school life, most of it is very true. You get allot of good points across.
Another good topic to write about.
Keep writing :)

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Hahaha... Thanks for reviewing :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your welcome. Anytime :)

[pikachulover]

lol good and somewhat true. Anyways, a fired-up poetry!

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Thank you very much!!!