Bittersweet Ending

No one knows what tomorrow will bring
And I may not promise anything
I may not give you a diamond ring
And so I'm here with you to sing

Is it grey, brown or blue
Let me see the pretty eyes of you
Don't hide behind your hair that is new
For you, I haven't really knew

We both look at the same moon and stars at night
As they watch us if we're alright
Till our eyes are hit by the morning light
And we'll start a brand new day with delight

Can I take your smile home with me
If I couldn't make you mine completely
Just because our worlds believe differently
And so we are not really meant to be

I read your letters now and then
You may keep mine or burn them if you can
A lot of words of love have been spoken
And lost their sense I don't know when

Why do you try to hide
If you feel me too inside
I put my trust in you and died
I wonder if you're telling the truth or lied

Tell me if you don't want me so
Or I'll instead jump off to the window
And so I won't hope too much for tomorrow
And walk straight to a new line I will draw

It's very usual to say "Hi"
But it's much harder to say goodbye
We've got to part and we know the reason why
That I've got to go to soar up very high

You're the one who's closing the door
And not me, who is waiting no more
Words come in different directions
And I'm still figuring out their connections

And now that is clear to see
That you have just fooled around with me
That you have left me drowned in misery
And I will never forget the way you played with trickery

Author's Note

Please review and rate my poem. Thank you!!!

Reviews

[pikachulover]

Again a good emotional piece, though all breaked up at the end. A very rhymed and well- though poem, keep it up!

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Thank you very much!!!

[Thaddius]

I like how you adhere to 4 line stanzas and pretty much and Ax4 rhyme scheme. It's easy to read and very aesthetically pleasing. Cool subject. I'd recommend focusing even bit less on the flow and more on the content. good job

[Ross Emerson Realino]

Ok. I'll try to be more experimental. Tnx btw...