Predator

Predator

A Poem by ROSALIND

The Dreaded word 
Don't touch me 
Don't creep on me 
Don't peep at me 
Don't  glare   at. me 
Don't  butter me up 
Nor silence me 
My body is to be respected
Not made for your 
Daily pleasure
It's not meant to be defiled
It's meant for the marriage bed.
It's a gift 
I don't deserve to be robbed 

© 2023 ROSALIND


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Strong and honest words. My grandfather told my sisters. Don't give it away. Some woman, men take to the motel. Some men take the woman to meet the mama. They keep the one, mama liked. Thank you dear Rosalind for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Yes Rosalind, it is a dreaded word for women because there are many predators around. You have given a strong warning here that you know what their intentions are and you can recognize the signs. Conveyed with a message of don’t you dare.

Chris



Posted 1 Year Ago


Protectively potent. Desperately demanding.

Lovely read. Strong voice.

With love,

Matthew

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An excellent poem with a voice.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I totally agree. Women should be loved, protected, valued, respected and more.

Posted 1 Year Ago


wow sister this very deep it describes the plight of a woman in a mans world , don't know what to say I agree in one thing its the woman who meets the man before he can become one. Thank you for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

I had to come back my comment did not show my views we as man disrespect the woman not knowing witho.. read more
Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

you're a good writer
Wow this is hardhitting and yet expresses vulnerability at the same time in a poetic voice of defiance.

Posted 1 Year Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

1 Year Ago

Line one perhaps 'dreaded word?
ROSALIND

1 Year Ago

Thanks corrected the error
Powerful message pounded home by the use and choice of paratactic sentence structure.

Winston

Posted 1 Year Ago


I think perhaps, your writing says far more than it shows. But, maybe by writing your emotions and shouting the letters into space, you'll see both your own fragile but obvious defiance and power, Rosalind. There is so much courage here and it surprises me that out of thirty (30) views, others have neither turned away or stayed shocked but unable to understand. Seems it takes thought and understanding to stand in someone else's shoes - sad world.

Posted 1 Year Ago


ROSALIND

1 Year Ago

Thankyou 💔❤️🌈

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Added on October 3, 2023
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ROSALIND
ROSALIND

EDINBURGH, lothian , United Kingdom



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